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Sunday, March 30, 2014

Coverage: Star Wars Episode V: The Empire Strikes Back

"Luke, don't jump-- there are spoilers down there!" -Darth Vader

SCRIPT COVERAGE

TITLE:  Star Wars Episode V: The Empire Strikes Back
SETTING: A galaxy far, far away
AUTHOR:  George Lucas
PERIOD: A long, long time ago
PRODUCER:  Gary Kurtz
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READ BY: Darin Simokov
GENRE: Science Fiction
COVERAGE DATE: 03/30/14
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LOG LINE: Luke Skywalker continues his struggle to subdue and eliminate the Galactic Empire, but not without some help from his friends.

SUMMARY: Set three years after its predecessor, Luke receives a vision of his fallen mentor Obi Wan telling him to train under Jedi Grand Master Yoda in the planet Dagobah. Before he can do that, the Imperial fleet attacks the Jedi base in Hoth. After defeating the fleet, being captured, and escaping, Luke travels to planet Dagobah, where Yoda accepts him as his mentor. After training for a while, Luke becomes haunted by premonitions of Leia and Han Solo in danger. So, he cuts his training off early to save them in Cloud City. Unfortunately, Darth Vader arrives before him. Before he freezes Han in a block of carbonite, Han and Leia profess their love for each other. Vader intends to do the same to Luke. Instead, once Luke arrives, they duel with their lightsabers. After some struggle, Vader severs Luke’s right hand. Conveniently for Vader, this hand also contained his lightsaber. Now defenseless, Luke can only look in horror as Vader reveals the truth about his father. Before Luke can accept Vader’s offer to rule the galaxy with him, he falls down an airshaft, escaping what may have been certain death. After being rescued by Leia, they leave to rescue the frozen Han Solo.

COMMENTS: The original Star Wars set a very high bar for science-fiction movies, but The Empire Strikes Back sets it even higher. It contains all of the memorable characters from A New Hope, in new and exciting conflicts (even Obi-Wan makes an appearance, despite his death in the last movie—thank goodness for Force ghosts!). Although this movie build upon many concepts and plots from A New Hope, it stands well enough on it’s own. Each recurring character is re-established, but has added motivation and new goals. Conveniently,the iconic title crawl at the beginning of the movie orients viewers on what happened and what’s to come. The plot is set far enough from the last so that new viewers don’t have to watch the last episode to understand the fifth. Those who have watched the fourth episode are treated to further character development, and more high-stakes situations, captivating plots and masterful cinematography. The special effects may not have aged well (just ask George Lucas after ruining remaking all of them), but still contribute to the sense of immersion you feel—the sense that you’ve been thrusted upon an enthralling science-fiction world, with a believable and interesting cast of characters.
Anyone who watches this movie is also treated to the best plot twist in cinema history. Nowadays, it’s a shame that the twist is so ingrained in our culture, since it ruins the surprise for new first-time watchers. For them, it’s likely that they learn of the twist shortly after they hear of Star Wars for the first time. For those who don’t know, you need to watch Empire immediately. You’d be foolish to not recommend this.